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arachnids' slaughterer
Contributed by
Luinil
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:25:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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Protector of young, naïve child
Instigator of spontaneous smile
Slaughterer of arachnid foe
Mender of torment and woe
Conqueror of flawed perception
Leader of undiscovered direction
Warrior of overwhelming defeat
Achiever of ambition’s treat
Life half-lived devoid of guidance
Voice of wisdom inspiring silence
Stirring pride, my countenance shies
Hearing ‘you have your father’s eyes’
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-16 14:25:07]
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Re: arachnids' slaughterer
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by Dusty on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:48:00 PM AEST
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| Lovely tribute to your father. It's nice to see people that are close to their parents. Great write. ~Dusty~ |
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Re: arachnids' slaughterer
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by waos on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 03:32:22 PM AEST
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| that was really good...i'm glad you have a dad like that. i don't relate to how awesome it must feel, but the words you put together sound really good. |
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Re: arachnids' slaughterer
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by brigitte7735 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:43:44 PM AEST
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omg this is the best fathers day tribute i have ever read!!
Vanessa ( 090404 ) |
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