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Without You
Contributed by
mechemu
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Eyes filled with teardrops
like pools of morning dew
oh how my aching hearts
crying out for you.
Do you realize the pain
that I'm going through
like wanting something I can't have
or can make you do.
Feeling rejected by
a love I thought was true
cutting at my heart
bruising my soul deep blue.
Life without you, has made
me so confused, and my mind
is blank about what I should do.
My damaged heart
still beating like when it was new .
It wasn't "he and she"
It was "us, we, me and you."
Copyright ©
mechemu
... [
2004-06-16 14:10:17]
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Re: Without You
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by WinterFox on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:20:14 PM AEST
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| Very nice piece...Oh, the pain of lost love...I know it well...Mike |
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Re: Without You
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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| beautiful peice... from a heart that has felt what you have written about.. there are better ones out there so don't give up |
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Re: Without You
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:09:19 PM AEST
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| I feel where you are coming from, cause everybody feels sad at some point in there life. Just hang in there and don't let something like this bring you down or stop you from loving someone.-luckycharm. |
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