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Silent Language
Contributed by
KSUHO11
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:17:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Silent Language
Silence broken with words unspoken
Everything for just one moment
For you I’m awake
These feelings so useless
With no one to feel them for
Will you stay the night
How can I live here
With my heart singing out
For you I’m alive
Thoughts so clear, with no one near
How can I do this and stay here
Will you come back to me
My vision is lost, but I still see you
With my eyes so blue
I’m alone, without you
How can I speak
When you already know my words
For you I hope
My senses going crazy, as I picture you
I cannot do this much longer
Will you take me as I am
Because I am…all yours
Copyright ©
KSUHO11
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2004-06-16 13:17:58]
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Re: Silent Language
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:26:25 PM AEST
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wow, this is lovely, you really shpw how big your heart is when you write your poetry, you are such a sweetie :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Silent Language
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:24:20 PM AEST
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| Nice job - I thought this was simply lovely |
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Re: Silent Language
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by DragonLuvSong on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:42:41 PM AEST
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| i like this a lot, i think the organization and rhythm is awesome! you did really great. |
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