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No Face 49 Days
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:08:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My soul's in my Stomach
It's like Butterflies
But a little different
I wounder why
I feel like an infant
Not even three days Old
From what I Know
I am stuct somewhere else
Hiden back on the self
My soul falls unheard
When I feel like some one else
I wonder what I've heard
And falling into space
Telling words to no face
_____________________
49 days
49 days
Thru the Bardo
Never saw a clear light
Came back as an owl
Don't believe they're so smart
Never knew how many
Licks to the center of a lolly pop
I cut off my ear
And sent it to a W****
I died
and came back a s***
Crossing the street my gap
It struts
Picking up bills for what I suck
Died a nasty death
49 days I could not rest
I came back a daughter
That was pleasant
But died an early servant
Then came back a writter
Serverly confused
Thinking about the illusion
wondering what's it to you
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-06-16 13:08:48]
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Re: No Face 49 Days
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:20:34 PM AEST
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both great., as always :)
pixie xx |
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Re: No Face 49 Days
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:51:21 PM AEST
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Deep, melancholy, slightly dark with an edge that bites you at the end.
Combined to eclipse so many thoughts and very strongly stated.
Loved this one!
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