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Your Star
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:29:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I bought you a star for Valentine’s day,
A token to say I love you in every single way,
You shine brightly like your star,
You love can be witnessed from afar.
Forever your star will sit up high,
Twinkling greatly in the sky,
I chose the biggest and the best,
Because juts like you it outshines the rest.
I wanted you to have something to keep,
To watch over you while you sleep,
Your star makes sure you are alright,
And stays with you all through the night.
Even long after we are gone,
Your star will always live on,
Your star, the one I picked for you,
To show you my love would be forever true.
The love I hold for you is in your star,
I love and adore you for the person you are,
My love is not just for Valentine’s day.
This feelings I have is here to stay.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-16 11:29:45]
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Re: Your Star
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by lexxie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:35:21 AM AEST
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beatuiful you seem to love him,good for you keep em coming
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Re: Your Star
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:10:04 PM AEST
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very beautiful, loving and so sweetly written:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Your Star
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by WinterFox on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:10:39 PM AEST
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Excellent, Pixie...
This touches a chord with me..My love got me a little trinket that I keep in my pocket at all times. Whenever I reach in my pocket, I feel that and think of her..
Well done...Mike |
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Re: Your Star
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:47:32 PM AEST
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| Awww....How cute & dorky all at the same time :-D |
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Re: Your Star
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:26:16 PM AEST
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| Sweetly read. Best of wishes for you. |
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Re: Your Star
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:35:09 PM AEST
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What a beautiful gesture, Pixie. Long live his star.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Your Star
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:07:21 PM AEST
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| Aww...that was so sweet. :) |
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Re: Your Star
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:59:29 AM AEST
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what a wonderful loving idea, now everytime he looks at the sky, he can think of you. aaaawwwww... you're too sweet.
mel |
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