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For The Feel Of Me
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:50:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I WANT TO
HAIL
HAIL
Hell
I want to
Feel
Heal
Kill sensations that show I'm real
I want to
Hail
Heal
Feel the light of a better day
Thru this darkend soul
And grow the will on the way
To release control
I want to
Feel so far out of this side
Give up on doubt
Stay alive til I have died
To see what it was about
I want to
Heal
Feel the pain from a new place
Feel all things may never lay to waist
I want to
Know before I
Go
I want to
Show
I want to
Learn & feel me grow
I want to
Go once I
Know
I want to
Be
Then come back to
See
It's not all there
What it meant to
Me
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-06-16 07:50:30]
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Re: For The Feel Of Me
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:53:49 AM AEST
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great poem,
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Re: For The Feel Of Me
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by fairy-of-ice on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:02:29 PM AEST
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| wow, this is the best poem i have read in a long time! i love ''i want to hail hell i want to feel heal'' i can relate. such amazing writing! |
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Re: For The Feel Of Me
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:14:08 PM AEST
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| This was a good poem. Keep up the good work and you are a very good writer!.-luckycharm. |
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Re: For The Feel Of Me
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by Justalady on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:59:35 PM AEST
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| Talking to one's self can reveal many things. Truth is hard to write, much less relay to someone else. You've done a great job of just that. June |
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