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It Slays Me
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:08:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sinking
My heart to my stomach
My eyes to the floor
My spirits hit bottom
Your heart's what I've torn
Striking
It hits me
It hurts you
It is pain
And heartbreak
Sickening
Because your heat is breaking
Because I caused you pain
Because you only love me
Because your love yet remains
Slicing
I mended it all
i fixed what I'd done
I ended it all
Repeating time one.
Stabbing
You're lonely
But I'm yours again
I can't help
Because he's your friend
Surrounding
I'm stuck inside
A revolving door
A vicious cycle
How could I do more?
You're lonely
It stabs me
You're sad
It's slicing
You've only made me happy
And you deserve the same
Instead you're sad and lonely
As I hang my head in shame
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Re: It Slays Me
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:10:13 AM AEST
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awwww i hate those kinds of dreams they are awful, great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: It Slays Me
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by hooray_its_jen on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:43:29 AM AEST
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Great poem, very well written! Nice job, Chelsea!
~Jenna |
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Re: It Slays Me
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by lifefliesby on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:07:23 PM AEST
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Listen, I'm sorry
it's not your fault... we were always TOGETHER
and we are now
it's alright babe... I love you now and I always will
I'm here... in all ways, for always, and forever...
I love you
~Jared J.~ |
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Re: It Slays Me
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:41:05 PM AEST
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Whew! Powerful. Don't be so hard on yourself, Chelsea. It is good to reflect, to learn from past mistakes, to change them if possible...if right. But don't tear yourself apart. And be careful, you selfless child, that you do not just give in or change to please others, but that you change according to your conviction, according to what you mind tells you is true. Stay strong. Don't sway. Take care,
~Carrie~ |
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