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hmMMm?... gurl! ....
Contributed by
abie05
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:48:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i feel so lost in the night
without you by my side
damn! your lovin feel so right
though at times it makes me wanna hide
i miss you ...
and the way you make me feel
i long to hold you
but gurl you gotta keep it real ...
people say your a mistake
but what do they know
there'll be hell to pay though if ur jus a fake
gurl believe me you'll feel my blow ...
i know ur wid someone else rite now
and i think it's for da best
coz peeps will start hatin' on you, yah know
shoot! i really need to rest ...
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abie05
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2004-06-16 06:48:47]
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Re: hmMMm?... gurl! ....
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:59:18 AM AEST
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awww this is so sad, good poem, thanks for sharing
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Re: hmMMm?... gurl! ....
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by AzurePaladin on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:58:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful, sad poem. That sounds like a difficult situation... Love definitely is a very confusing thing. Just hang in there...
The spacing on the poem works very well... and I like the emphasis using bold font. Good job!
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