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Infrequent Visits (She Saw)
Contributed by
Calista
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:11:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She saw my college money jar,
But she doesn't see my goal.
She saw the pieces of writing,
But she doesn't see that I am a writer.
She sees my face,
But she doesn't see me.
Why can't my mother,
Be a mom to me?
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Calista
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2004-06-16 02:11:52]
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Re: Infrequent Visits (She Saw)
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:16:31 AM AEST
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| Ill tell ya you just hit my nail on the head. I started writing about 13-14 years old and I dont think my parents know yet.... very heart breaking. I value your writing and I think you should share it with her maybe she'll see how wonderful it is, and that you have such a talent. A++++ |
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Re: Infrequent Visits (She Saw)
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:07:51 AM AEST
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| good luck with your goal and writings. maybe your mom doesnt want to distort her image of you? |
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Re: Infrequent Visits (She Saw)
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:17:05 PM AEST
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| I think and feel the same way as you do and I have been writing for 19 years this is an awesome poem and I hope I can read more of your poetry soon. |
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