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LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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emystar
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:48:42 AM in AEST
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"Aisv Nv Wa Do Hi Ya Do"
(Walk in Peace)
::RAINz SIGz::
Now Lawd, even if I'm talken
on a phone
so tired of listening
2 the same ole song.
In less than a New York minete
jus a little prayer.
Can't listen 2 intense
less than a New York minete
Conversation ended there.
See, he can't talk 2
any one but me.
It's same story again
but listening anyway, see?
A couple hours here,
then a few there.
Not like I'm missing anything
My car want go no where.
This time see, needed
a big, little break.
Mind strectch too far
very hard 2 relate.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-06-16 00:48:42]
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Re: LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:57:16 AM AEST
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| nice. short and to the pont. I like em that way! good poem A+++ |
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Re: LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:46:49 AM AEST
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i agree with the above comment emy,
short ones that are to the point are always really cool...
'cept long ones can be just as good...
anyway, i like the flow in this poem,
and because it was really honest and stuff...
I loved it emy!
Brilliant write!
_.:'~Katie~':._ |
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Re: LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:23:51 AM AEST
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You must be a good friend! I loved the way you wrote this, it was cute. Hope you got your car started. lol And see, our prayers ARE answered!
Good one, emy.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:55:25 AM AEST
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beautiful picture and catchy tune, emy girl, sweet write!! hugs n' loves ya, nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:15:52 PM AEST
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| Thats lovely. I wonder how the tune would go?? |
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Re: LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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by venkat on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:22:46 AM AEST
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| Emy dear..this is very short but very nice to the point...hugs n love:-) venkat |
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Re: LESS THAN A NEW YORK MINETE
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:49:56 PM AEST
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| more points when you get to the pearly gates for absorbing the pain others need us to listen to. |
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