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Somedays
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:12:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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somedays I get lonely
when I remember you
somedays I start to tremble
I dont know what to do
somedays I get so angry
when I think of how your gone
somedays I start to cry
when I hear your favorite song
somedays I cant forget
how beautiful you are
somedays I regret
not being up to par
somedays I see clearly
and see you really hurt me
somedays I tell myself
that you wont ever want me
somedays I understand
and see your hurtful ways
somedays I give in
I cant stand those days
somedays I try new things
to make up what I lack
somedays Im really weak
cause somedays I want you back...
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Re: Somedays
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:33:15 AM AEST
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To quote Joan Baez "some days are diamond, some days are rust". I remember feelings like this. You know you are probably better off without them, but it would still be great to have them back. I like this piece.
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Re: Somedays
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:21:35 AM AEST
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i understand...
i like the way this poem finishes |
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Re: Somedays
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by Calista on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:23:31 AM AEST
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| this is an amazing, beautiful and very very true write. i am in love with your poetry, Holder...thank you. ~Calista |
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Re: Somedays
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:25:27 AM AEST
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This one jus reached out and grabbed me by the heart. I can certainly relate to this-n- everyone should as it exsposes your heart.
so many emotions we have 2 get thru.
a masterpeice!
Luved it.
huggs, smiles, luv,
emy |
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Re: Somedays
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:18:50 AM AEST
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I like this one. It expresses itself well. And I like the ending.
Well done!
Take care now.
Andrew |
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Re: Somedays
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:27:52 AM AEST
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wow, such a great write I really enjoyed this one for sure...lol as always...I liked the whole reversing type thing going on....really great emotional stuff...I loved it keep it up....
much love,
Dani
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Re: Somedays
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:28:38 AM AEST
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very touching, great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Somedays
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:17:36 AM AEST
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so beautifully heartfelt, an exceptional write:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Somedays
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:20:52 PM AEST
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| Lovely ending. I liked the whole poem entirely, its beautiful. And I know most of us have had these feelings. |
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