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Dripping Blood
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dripping Blood
You write poetry
To tell the world
How you feel
You reject their thoughts
They aren't good enough
You think you're right
Do you even care
Who you hurt?
Do you even care
About the dripping blood?
You don't care
About anyone but yourself
And you want to kill yourself
You care for nothing
You don't amount to anything
You are filled with hate
And ruin everyone else's life
I had pity for you
But that evaporated
I don't care if you kill yourself
I cared before I knew
Who you really were
You ignited the flame
In my heart of hate
You write poetry
To gain sympathy
The world no longer cares
You might as well end it right here
Because no one cares
If you make it through
Even you
The world no longer cares
And it's your fault
In the end
You just wanted attention
For your bleeding wrists
You just wanted attention
Like it wasn't enough
The scars you inflict
Are in vain
The blood no longer drips
Your veins hold nothing
But the hatred
Live or die
It doesn't matter
You never lived
You were dead within
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2004-06-15 23:25:15]
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:29:26 PM AEST
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You ignited the flame
In my heart of hate- wow these lines cry out to me. I feel the anger here and I think its good to get out. great poem asusaul. A++++ |
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:32:46 PM AEST
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| thanks. |
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:35:52 PM AEST
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| i really liked this and it can be so true you put it in super words :) congrats keep it up i look foward to more of your stuff |
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:31:56 AM AEST
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very, very good. the hate that screams out is splendid. awesome write keep it up
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:27:43 AM AEST
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wow, great write, look forward to more
pixie xx |
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:25:23 AM AEST
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i dont think i would say that to anyone who was contemplating suicide ever, its sad that you could no longer relate to them, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by brigitte7735 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:09:10 PM AEST
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Very powerful, and no matter the subject or the stand you take on it you cant deny that...
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:53:04 PM AEST
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this made me sad and I don't know why. I liked the last line 'dead within' so true...
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:12:01 AM AEST
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Truer words were never written, and the inspiration (and inspirator) is quite evident. Every word is tinged with undeniable honesty, and the entity about whom this is written should study this as their bible.
I agree with every last letter. Excellently done, couldn't have said it better myself.
Stabbed in the back,
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by Archie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:52:10 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem dangerous but good |
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Re: Dripping Blood
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:17:59 PM AEST
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Powerful write.
Very true. |
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