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not her
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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could you ever
see me
in any other way
not as a friend?
could we ever be more then friends
i know you feel it to
cant you just let go
run with your heart
hold me tight
all though the night
shine a light
in my dark world
show me not all mankinds sucks
that there is some good
could you do these things for me
i would for you
cant you just love me back
not her
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2004-06-15 23:05:49]
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Re: not her
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:29:23 AM AEST
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A sad cry for love. Very poignant. I hope you will find it.
Blessings.
Andrew |
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Re: not her
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by cetblue on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:39:30 PM AEST
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| Very emotional; the frustration of the speaker just screams to the reader. Good work! |
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