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Forever My First
Contributed by
calista
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:09:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Forever My First
June 15, 2004
I had never felt so alone,
Like I did those nights.
Always on the bed,
Wondering what I could have said,
To bring you back to me.
Every second was an hour,
When I was away from you.
You were the best of both worlds,
And now I have none.
So here I am wondering,
What have you done?
There must be something,
Anything, I can do to take back that day.
But my mind can’t make,
The words I mean to say.
I just don’t know why,
You ended us that way.
Forever my first,
If nothing else will last.
I’ll always remember you,
And maybe on day I’ll ask.
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calista
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2004-06-15 22:09:06]
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Re: Forever My First
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:38:54 AM AEST
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You were the best of both worlds,
And now I have none.-- deep. I can relate with this. a strong poem, but very sad. great job A++++
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Re: Forever My First
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:24:01 AM AEST
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very emotional and sad, but greatly expressed
pixie xx |
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