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the last moments
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:47:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i sit all alone in the corner of my room
with a sudden burt of energy i leap up
slowly and cautiously i walk over to my desk
i pull out the third drawer and dig to the bottom
finally my hand runs over it, carefully i pick it up
my cold fingers close around the black handle
with a tight grip i carry it back to my chair
tears form in my eyes as i think about my friends
i quietly scriblle a note and turn on some music
my mind focuses on what i was doing before
with shaking hands i make a small cut
my throart starts to drip with blood, i begin again
i shove it through my gut and rip it apart
repeatedly i stab and tear away at my body
through my tears i see blood all over
i return to my throat but now deeper
now when i slice its for a reason
its not just to feel the blade inside me
its to end my pain, my suffering, my hurt, my life
i cut deeply and watch the blood pour out
my brown comfy chair is now a chrimson red
so many thoughts race through my head
so many memories replayed vividly
i see faces of friends who will be sad
i start to lose energy and i'm getting weak
with my last ounce of strength i crawl to my futon
i lay down and close my eyes tightly
i apologize to the world and then i see it
the bright warm light, my sign its almost over
take my last breath and my last view of the world
i've left the pain and torture of this life
i've moved onto a better happier place
a place where ill be happy with my real father
my only father who loves me dearly
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deadbloodyrose
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2004-06-15 20:47:52]
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Re: the last moments
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:59:56 PM AEST
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| strong strong words... very descriptive write, great ob full of emotions. I wish you the best. A++++ |
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Re: the last moments
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:04:20 AM AEST
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very dark and grim, but a great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: the last moments
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:28:57 AM AEST
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an outstanding write.Very captive and vividly written.Keep writing
~vermillion~ |
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