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Water Child
Contributed by
WereCat
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I am a child of water & night
Empathy’s my power compassion my might
Cancer by moon, pisces by sun
My emotions exhausted when the say is done
I am a daughter of the moon
of King Poseidon, Lord Neptune
I’m of the rivers, I’m like the sea
Always flowing, I must be free
It’s like rain clouds on a b!tchen hot day
Let the rain wash your troubles away
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WereCat
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2004-06-15 20:02:06]
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Re: Water Child
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:28:14 PM AEST
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Very nice work here. The flow is good. Imagery is great.
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Re: Water Child
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:54:37 AM AEST
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great flow, a really great poem,
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Re: Water Child
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:30:03 PM AEST
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I LOVED this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have to write more like it! .... and if I'm wrong don't be mad... but are you pagan??
Jaime |
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