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Unwanted
Contributed by
Fluffhead
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:58:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I feel so alone,
My heart is at loss,
I am sitting here under this tree,
No one wants me,
No one can love me unconditionslly,
What is wrong with me?
I am so cold,
I am so alone,
I can hear my own heart break,
No one to love,
No one to care,
So alone,
So lost,
So unwanted
Copyright ©
Fluffhead
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2004-06-15 18:58:23]
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Re: Unwanted
(User Rating: 1 )
by hearmyvoice on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:19:22 PM AEST
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| You conveyed your feelings very well with so few words. When I read it I can feel what you are feeling. Very nice. |
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Re: Unwanted
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by NoahsARK on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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| You are good with words. Keep it up and I think you did a great job! |
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