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Rationalizing the Blood Red Pain
Contributed by
waos
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:04:02 PM in AEST
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It's just scratching an itch
that's underneath your skin.
It's just bleeding out
all the pain within.
It's not so bad. Honest.
It's not a big deal. Honest.
But we can't get me
to stop. Honest.
It's just the way I've found to survive another day.
It's just the expression I use
to say the words I don't know how to say.
Can you forgive me please?
Cause you see: it's not really all that bad.
Honest.
It's just the answer to my questions
that slow my swirling thoughts.
It's just the way I get the voices quiet,
but it seems I'm caught.
It's not a big deal. Honest.
It's not so bad. Honest.
It's all just rationalization.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-06-15 18:04:02]
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Re: Rationalizing the Blood Red Pain
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by diamond_tears on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:18:37 PM AEST
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| i no the feeling... |
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Re: Rationalizing the Blood Red Pain
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:34:34 PM AEST
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very good!
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Re: Rationalizing the Blood Red Pain
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by Dusty on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:28:54 PM AEST
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| Coming from someone eho USED to cut, this poem is very touching, and deeper than it seems. I like and even better understand it. |
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Re: Rationalizing the Blood Red Pain
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by pyrofairyburning on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:36:52 PM AEST
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Excellent indeed. I've been carving since I was nine years old and have read many peices that try to enlighten others on the emotional conflate, and none have, save you. It touched me in a very personal way, and you have great courage to write about something so close to home. Excellent indeed.
Blessed Be,
Tink |
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Re: Rationalizing the Blood Red Pain
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:29:38 AM AEST
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| well written poem on a difficult topic. I feel the emotion here. your not alone.... A++++ |
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Re: Rationalizing the Blood Red Pain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:07:49 AM AEST
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Wow! I think this is the first i've read but I'm going to check out more and this was just awesome awesome! I loved this so much and understand how you feel.
~Kris~ |
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