|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
THE TRAP OF CLUES
Contributed by
justinblue
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:42:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
The trap is set and forever it will await
Constantly setting forth temptation as bait
The trap is cunning, I't dose'nt instsntly bound you
It works systematically to catch you
Leaving you without a clue
Copyright ©
justinblue
... [
2004-06-15 17:42:25] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: THE TRAP OF CLUES
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:19:22 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Your point is there in the poem but the glaring errors take away the shine fo the work. You might PM Mick and ask him to make corrections for you. It is really a good work.
Rita |
|
|
Re: THE TRAP OF CLUES
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:28:19 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
excellent write. =] |
|
|
|