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You Love Me....
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:08:15 PM in AEST
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I thought that if you said you love me,
All of my hurts would disappear.
And though my tears won free,
I still stand by this broken mirror.
You say you love my beautiful smile,
My laugh and my sense of humor.
Those things are gone, rotting in exile,
My childhood has become my tumor.
You made me cry real tears,
They streaked down my face.
Twisted with all my fears,
Finding me in my hiding place.
They confirm what I already knew,
Now I know you don't understand.
You have three daughters, but worry about two,
I wonder why I always felt scammed.
To you, I was always 'okay',
I slit my wrist, you doctored my 'rash',
I lived. But day by day,
My soul rips with the weight of this gash.
Your words now seem so hollow,
Now that I confront you.
You can lead, but I won't follow,
So you say you love me... is it true?
Jaime Moran
June 15 2004
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Re: You Love Me....
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:16:13 PM AEST
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| At one time I felt that way about my Mom too. I took time and got to know her before she passed away. I am grateful that i did and I hope you do the same. |
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Re: You Love Me....
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by wolfwynd on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:17:41 PM AEST
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| this poem speaks volumes. it is very well written and conveys lots of different emotion. good write. i know some of where your coming from, i've been there. if you ever need to chat - feel free to keep in touch xx |
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Re: You Love Me....
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by slackoffsamiam on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:03:09 PM AEST
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| wow thats deep, true poetry at its essence |
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Re: You Love Me....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:30:09 PM AEST
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| Jaime, your poem is well written but I am concerned about the feelings in it. Don't turn away from her. Could it be that maybe you are the more dependable trustworthy one that she doesn't have to worry about so much? I am just asking because I had one son I had to keep a close eye on and worry about and the other son I didn't have to. The one I didn't worry so much about thought I cared more for the other one, which was not true and he realized that later when we had a long talk about it. That may not be your case but don't pull away. We always need our mothers and when they are gone it is too late to make amends. Hugs, Rita |
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Re: You Love Me....
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:39:07 PM AEST
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beautifully writen, but, awww, ((((jaime)))) so sorry sweetie she can hurt you like that, you know i loves ya, nessmum xxxx
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Re: You Love Me....
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:41:05 AM AEST
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very emotion filled and a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: You Love Me....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:38:32 AM AEST
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Wow, I'm sure she loves you Jaime, it would be impossible not too, you're a lovable girl. *pouts* I hate to read poems of you down, one day i'll just have to hug you for all the times in which I couldn't... I'll have to start a tally *grins*
As for a poem, bravo mi'dear, truly breathtaking.
You sis
- Beccers |
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