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All for you
Contributed by
orgygirl
on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Whenever I see you
I forget to breathe
You hide behind your emotionless gaze
So mysterious
Almost deceiving
You have never left my thoughts
But have I ever entered your mind
Somewhat more than an aquaintance?
I fear the question
More than the anwser
I know you more than I should
A little old fashion
I'm a hopeless romantic
But would you settle for any less?
And so you block me from your world
I sense its in spite of something you lack
Or maybe its me
The hypocrites told me you have an ego
I tried to forget you
And stain your good name
Like the way my clothes stain
After the razor penetrates my wrists
My heart yearns to hate
I hear you speak fondly of me
While explaining why we can't date
So contradicting
And so I hate
Only hate how I don't hate you at all
Copyright ©
orgygirl
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2002-10-17 10:30:00]
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Re: All for you
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by rockshv on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 03:21:16 PM AEST
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nicely written!
keep it up!
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Re: All for you
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by ThornMEngla on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 08:25:35 PM AEST
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I can relate!
I like the ending,
"I hear you speak fondly of me
While explaining why we can't date
So contradicting
And so I hate
Only hate how I don't hate you at all"
Good Job!
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Re: All for you
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by WAE on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:39:51 AM AEST
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All your poems (so far I've read) have a touch of certain nostalgy and sadness. Very sincere and touchy... I like your style...
Alex |
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