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untitled
Contributed by
livingdeadgirl67
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:41:46 PM in AEST
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My hopes
My Dreams
The every concept of life
Doesn’t seem like anything new
Theres so much I could do
If I could just let go of you.
Theres so much for which to strive
If only you would leave
Im not ready to end the fun
Im not quit done
No more sadness I guess
I guess I’ll have to go on.
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2004-06-15 16:41:46]
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Re: untitled
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by hooray_its_jen on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:05:40 PM AEST
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Hey, I think your poem is anything but bad. I liked it and I don't care what you say about it!
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Re: untitled
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by lexxie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:05:52 PM AEST
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very beautiful your best one yet lol loved it
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Re: untitled
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by lexxie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:06:58 PM AEST
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it was beautiful your best one loved it
13ckck!3
or lexxie lol
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