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Two Souls
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:26:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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eyes unfocused
love lost in tacky blood
crys to be different
cries to be the same
scream echo in my skull
why do the poor weep?
and the rich sob?
swiftly abandoning in pain
waves of guilt trap me in
flowers gently snap open
soil closes over an oily coffin
two souls
bound by love's caress
and heavenly whispers
two souls
lost in each other
ignoring all the cries
outside their world
two souls blend into one
one forever,
til darkness comes.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-15 15:26:16]
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Re: Two Souls
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:48:00 PM AEST
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wow, very emotional and dark, i really liked this one, great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Two Souls
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by ksprincess42004 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:48:38 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Two Souls
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:28:42 PM AEST
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Nice job.
I was struck thinking "no, the poor sob and the rich weep"
It made me stop and think - I liked that. |
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Re: Two Souls
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by Dusty on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:44:59 PM AEST
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| Wow, that's right. I really enjoyed this one. I had to read it again! |
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Re: Two Souls
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:38:23 AM AEST
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| beautiful. this has alot of heart in it. strong words. great write A++++ |
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