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War
Contributed by
wolfwynd
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:01:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A war raging inside my head,
Emotions there seems no release from,
Is it love? Lust? Or just the need to be
Loved completely by another, to be
Connected with another on an emotional plane?
Should I cut my loses and go to her?
Or wait for the woman who is my life?
The drug to which I am truely addicted?
And so I run blindly towards oblivion,
The war raging inside my head.
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2004-06-15 15:01:19]
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Re: War
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:35:54 PM AEST
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I like this.... it shows the struggle between waiting for the love of your life or going with the moment....... I think you need a little of both....
Jaime |
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Re: War
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:35:13 AM AEST
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| go with what your heart says is right. a strong piece that im sure many can relate with its message. A+++ |
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Re: War
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:46:21 AM AEST
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An interesting angle of attack - I liked your questioning on the level of warfare, and the contrast enhanced what otherwise made an enjoyable read, into an interesting and enjoyable read.
Thanks for writing it. |
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