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a night with you
Contributed by
taintedorange21
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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i feel your little palm lost inside of mine
i see those gorgeous eyes twinkle and shine
your hair not fully there
somethin so beautiful and i'm so glad
that for a night
you're mine and only mine
i look at you lookin back at me
your body jus moves up and down so gently
you are the perfection
i've always dreamed i'd reach
and this time i succeeded
i waited for this for so long
she's holding you
i wish i could be her
just to be next to you
some things are so unfair
but i'll watch you from heaven
as all angels do
i'm so sorry
i had to say goodbye
goodbye so soon
i wanna cry
every tear for you
fight every fight
in hopes that you
won't get a scratch
not even a bruise
stop all pain
if God will let me
i'll use my wings
to protect you from everything
you stare into me
with those big brown eyes
and i wish you could see
why i can't live my life
they said to have you
would be my demise
but for a night with you
i gladly gave my life
and as she came for you
i said goodbye
i wished i could be her
so i could hold you tight
but i'll watch you from heaven
as all angels do
i'm so sorry
i had to say goodbye
goodbye so soon
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Re: a night with you
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by GeorgeJamesDelgado on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:05:48 PM AEST
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God, what a great poem. I really like it.
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Re: a night with you
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:54:08 PM AEST
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beautifully written, but so sad at the same time..... great work
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Re: a night with you
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by wolfwynd on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:52:43 PM AEST
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wow... I truely have no words to describe how beautifully sad this poem is... excellent write - please keep up the work - you have real talent. I'll be watching your poems with interest
Laura xx |
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Re: a night with you
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by jmt25607 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:49:26 PM AEST
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| i dont no what to say but wow that is a good poem i wish i could write like that it is so sad and so heart touching i dont really know what to say but keep writeing |
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