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How Strong You Are
Contributed by
dusty
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:12:23 PM in AEST
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For those to Whom it Matters,
You don't know what you're missing,
For Those to Whom it Matters,
I hope you are all listening,
For those to Whom it matters,
Words once said in jest,
Are putting someone's feelings,
and your freindship to the test,
For Those to Whom it Matters,
I hope you take the time,
I hope you find it in you,
To read the next few lines,
For Those to Whom it Matters,
The walls need to come down,
The blame cannot be placed,
Quit passing it around,
For Those to Whom it Matters,
Open up the door,
Don't make the same mistakes,
That you have made before.
Copyright ©
dusty
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2004-06-15 14:12:23]
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Re: How Strong You Are
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:43:23 PM AEST
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| I found the repetitions quite distracting but a good write none of the less. |
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Re: How Strong You Are
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:58:13 PM AEST
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I guess I'm repeater......I like it when someone repeats lines......gives it much emphasis......and the helps the time!
I really enjoyed this poem Dusty because it shows unlike others maybe they will learn from their mistakes. It's very hard for people to change these days......don't make the same mistakes you made before......a good ending line for sure!
And WELCOME DUSTY to YPDC......you're going to love it here, you'll see!
And thank you so much for your fine comment on my Drunk on the Bus.
Welcome again,
lovingcritters
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