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Spell Bound
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:04:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am spell bound by the thought of you,
Dizzy with desire , unsure of what to do,
Mesmerised by your charms,
Such a longing to be in your arms.
A wanting that’s so deeply rooted,
Not something that can be substituted,
I must have you by my side,
Hold you close and guide you inside.
I feel myself aching to become one,
As soon as I saw you my addiction had begun,
I had to make you forever mine,
Share a love that would be so divine.
It’s as if you cast a spell over me,
From this feeling I don’t want to break free,
You have captured all my darkest desires,
Set alight my inner most fires.
Never before have I felt so intoxicated,
Dancing on an edge that is so serrated,
This love leaves me carving more,
Makes my heart race and temperature soar.
Being with you is such a tingling delight,
Making love to you all through the night,
I pull you into me and make you surround,
Explosions so fierce it can be felt from all around.
Our love knows no limit,
This is a love that’s not for the timid,
As we pump off so much raw emotion,
And drink each others magic potion.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-15 11:04:13]
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Re: Spell Bound
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:11:59 AM AEST
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| beautiful wording, intense imagery. good job. 5 stars |
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Re: Spell Bound
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:02:04 PM AEST
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| very powerful and creative...especially with your rhyming. great job!* |
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Re: Spell Bound
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:59:18 PM AEST
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This love leaves craving more.....instead of carving more.........I knew what you meant Pixie, but I like it when others find my mistakes, and knew you would too!
Wow.......this is what I call a real "TINKLER"
With a capital "T" What a wonderful way of expressing your emotions so that others could share your romantic involvement. I'm 67 years old Pixie.....and I still haven't forgotten......it was a real teaser......written with class and style too!
Congratulations to you!
And you lucky fellow!
love
consue |
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Re: Spell Bound
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:10:57 PM AEST
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Wow, Pixie, delightfully sensual. I love this. I must say I think I have enjoyed this the most so far of your work. Fantastic.
Rita |
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Re: Spell Bound
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by lexxie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:40:41 AM AEST
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very powerful agian your so awsome with rythem!
lexxie |
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Re: Spell Bound
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:14:29 PM AEST
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beautiful, sensuous and whoo whoo lol, well done:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Spell Bound
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by WinterFox on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:07:01 AM AEST
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Very sexy piece, Pixie...and very beautifully depicted.
A nice write...Mike |
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