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Each Time I Dream Of Love
Contributed by
blueheart
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:12:56 AM in AEST
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Moon lit walks by the sea side,
Blooms of red on Valentines,
Comforting hugs when teardrops fall,
Each time I dream of love, I'm small.
Tender kisses beneath starry nights,
Feeling so beautiful in his sight,
Split second moments when I can fly,
Each time I dream of love, I cry.
Cuddling close in front of the screen,
Blissful times when heaven is seen,
Hands are held, electrifying touch,
Each time I dream of love, I'm crushed.
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:17:01 AM AEST
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| the imagery you create in this poem is simply beautiful. -david |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:27:26 AM AEST
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oh hanna, this is breathtakingly gorgeous!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by eatfresh22 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:47:40 AM AEST
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This was really beautiful. I love how you compare yourself to love by showing how you can't compare. The imagery was great, and I loved the emotion and memories that went into it. Beautiful.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:36:20 AM AEST
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this is so sad and so beautiful..,i can't imagine my life without having any love in it :(
great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:57:14 PM AEST
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Your poem is excellent. Wonderful imagery & it clutches at the heart, the ending is perfect as well.
Chin up cause you'll find love I just know it.
May it be everything in this poem and more. :)
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by ksprincess42004 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:30:04 PM AEST
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| you are very gifted at creating mental images. Great write. |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:18:00 PM AEST
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Ah, but one day your one special love will come into your life and you will no longer be crushed. You will bloom like a rose and life will be so great. True love is so marvelous. Just wait, you will see and all other loves you had will seem so insignificant to you. Be happy and don't rush. Let is come naturally. It is worth the wait.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:16:03 AM AEST
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| Dreams which are not realised cause such feelings..3 stanzas were written exquisitely..good imagery packed with sad emotion..welldone. venkat |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:53:07 AM AEST
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Dreams can be such sweet booze...but to face the hangover once you wake up...
Good and touching write!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:37:44 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing and I can relate.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:16:12 AM AEST
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| It is true that love can be a many splendoured thing as said by that great playwright. However look at it this way...without a love you do not have to remember the dates...anniversary and such...no extra expenditure and no headache from lover's quarrells. Indeed love too can be a many bothersome thing..heh heh....Anyway... a nice write here that depicts such longings for love....hehe....Do not worry maybe one day you wil be acquainted with that insufferable insanity of love....then you might write a different longing....Hah! |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:09:42 PM AEST
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You broke my heart with this masterpiece of sadness. The longing and loneliness jumped from the page and into the soul. When you least expect it my friend.......;o)
Very VERY well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:38:14 PM AEST
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Oh Blueheart,
This absolutely wonderful. I felt your emotions, and I've never read such a delightful poem about love in all my life. Right down to the clutching of his hand......you are so talented, Blueheart, and generous too.
I thank you so much for your loving comments on my poems as well!
This deserves five in my book!
lovingcritters
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:06:14 AM AEST
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A lovely poem, Blueheart. It was a very touching read, and said a lot about love and its emotive intensity.
5 stars. |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:24:03 AM AEST
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Ah, I know this feeling well. You've done a superb job putting it into words. Bravo! This is beautiful.
And keep your hope up! One of these days...
Andrew |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:56:55 AM AEST
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Auh whoa sadly beautiful in a sweet way, lovely write indeed. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by wray on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:13:38 AM AEST
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| What caught me was the "cuddling close in front of the screen" bit - how awesome is that feeling!! I honestly didn't realise other regular comp users found that nice homely activity as cosy and romantic as I do. Yay lol this does make me want to fall in love... |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:44:10 AM AEST
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I've jus read this again and I wonna say it's brethe taking beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Each Time I Dream Of Love
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by allie_07 on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 03:00:41 PM AEST
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this is one of the best poems ive read on this site.
beautiful. |
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