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IDOLIZING YOU
Contributed by
frejya
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:03:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Without you sometimes
I tremble 'cause of you
Feeling the love
Felt only by few
So lucky could be
Meself never knew
I ignore twenty-four-seven
You should know
The way I almost die
For the touch you know
And it's twenty-four-seven
I ignore, I know
Times preoccupied
Or spent too fast
Anything 'round could
Remind our past
Floods rush inside
For a superb contrast
I kneal before you
I yield, I defer
Obeying your every
Word, shout, murmur
You find some other
I'd like to kill her
Copyright ©
frejya
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2004-06-15 08:03:41]
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Re: IDOLIZING YOU
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:09:08 AM AEST
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Hmn. Somehow the last line doesn't quite fit in along with your introduction. Although some may find you jealousy a positive turn-on, others may well not.
Emotive and interesting write, nontheless.
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Re: IDOLIZING YOU
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:50:03 AM AEST
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good poem
pixie xx |
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