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I love you but these games you play...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:26:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I though this day
would be normal
or course as always
I was wrong
It had been so long
since I heard your voice
It was
mezmerizing
I was
captivated
I lost my breath
no longer did I think
of causing
my own death
yes you broke my heart
but you always know
how to mend it
I thought back
and remembered
just how
our hands fit
I remembered
back when
our skin would caress
eachothers softly
our crimson lips would meet
and we'd become one
I remembered
no matter what we did
we'd always have fun
you know
I still love you
and I think I always will
I love you so much
it almost makes me ill
I love you
but it hurts
It's my heart
the you kill
I cant keep thinking
about you
when you cant
talk to me
and be true
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Re: I love you but these games you play...
(User Rating: 1 )
by abie05 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:49:43 AM AEST
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| i hate peeps who play mind games like dat ... it's cool i like it ... keep it up gurl =) |
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Re: I love you but these games you play...
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:07:57 PM AEST
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this is sad, shame that people do play games as they dont know the damage it will cause, greatly written
pixie xx |
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Re: I love you but these games you play...
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by Heartfilledblood on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:51:39 PM AEST
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| Im sorry that he did this too you. I hope everything is or has gotten better for you. You are a very gifted writer. Thanks for sharing the poem :) |
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Re: I love you but these games you play...
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by wolfwynd on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:43:49 PM AEST
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I love you so much
it almost makes me ill
I love you
but it hurts
It's my heart
the you kill
This brings back so many old memories and not so old... I've been here - I'm still here in a way. Great write, I enjoyed it very much xx |
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