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This captured moment of experience
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:07:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The touch of your skin
an unbearable sweet sin
I swear I will cause you now harm
you bring goosebumps to my arm
your sweet crimson lips
your hands,
tightly placed on my hips
the tips of your fingers
tickle my cheek
my knees feel so,
very weak
you move your hand,
through my hair
I can feel
your intense, honest care
you hold me tight
I feel no need
to ever fight
I close my eyes
your all thats in sight
I look up at you
this captured moment of experience
is what I choose to do
my love for you is real
I know what it is
that I feel
I love the feeling
of this bliss
I hope it will forever
last and feel like this
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-06-15 02:07:41]
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Re: This captured moment of experience
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:14:54 AM AEST
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| I feel ya here.... I sometimes wish for the same thing. (but with her)another great write, you got alot of emotion in this one. heart felt. A++++ |
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Re: This captured moment of experience
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:13:58 PM AEST
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awwww this is beautiful,and yet so sad. I am sorry you are missing him, thank you for sharing this with us all,.
pixie xx |
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Re: This captured moment of experience
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:32:16 AM AEST
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an enchanting moment.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This captured moment of experience
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:57:20 PM AEST
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omg this is so sweet. You're very lucky to have had such a nice relationship...beautiful!
Summer |
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