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A tiny web
Contributed by
desertwispers
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 01:50:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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It started with a little lie
then it grew bigger
twisting out of controll
was the little spinner
at once things were lost
the games began to spiral
out of controll now
who is the biggest player
fun and games twisted
into a sticky mess
who would lose now
anyones guess
web is spun
someone is stuck
fairy tales playing
the one who cried wolf
now in the end
who is the friend
playing the games
you play watch out
you may be stuck in
your well spun web
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2004-06-15 01:50:46]
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Re: A tiny web
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:42:47 AM AEST
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A very good metaphor to use, although I found your anger a little muted in this one. However - you described a lot of things about a certain person, and I found this an enjoyable read because of it.
Thanks for writing. |
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Re: A tiny web
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:40:06 AM AEST
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| An apt poem with some good advice. |
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Re: A tiny web
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:15:23 PM AEST
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great poem, well worded
pixie xx |
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Re: A tiny web
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by recklessguy on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:17:16 AM AEST
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| one will become tangled if they play the game |
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