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Confused
Contributed by
slackoffsamiam
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:45:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Let it be known that I don't know
I was thinking that I thought I knew
But through and through the less I knew
Let it be known that you don't know
You think you thought you knew it all
I knew you knew less most of all
Let it be known that we don't know
We thought we were wholly wisened as a whole
But our folly fully forgoed what had previously been fathomed
Now that it is known we don't know
We want you to know
That I know, you know, we know..
Absolutely nothing
Copyright ©
slackoffsamiam
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2004-06-14 23:45:20]
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Re: Confused
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:06:27 AM AEST
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brilliant! i love your style and flow here completely:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Confused
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by sunnyrainbows on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:17:06 AM AEST
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| hey cool!! |
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Re: Confused
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:31:31 AM AEST
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this is cool you captured what Im feeling right now I know you know but I dont know anything at all fits perfectly great job
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Re: Confused
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:02:48 PM AEST
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I know that you know this is a really good knowing poem you have written here with the knowledge that you claim not to know....but I can plainly see you really do.,
I knew it from the very beginning this was going to be a great know it all poem, even if I've not that knowing at all, in fact fairly dumb. But you gave me confidence to know that you know how to write a poem......and that's just about all I know or ever will know from here! teehee loved this jazzy little number. I love jazzy little number you know!
And thank you Chris for you fine comment on my drunk on the bus!
He didn't know nothing either!
lovingcritters
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Re: Confused
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:02:51 PM AEST
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This is a tongue twister with pizzzzzzzzazzzz!!!
Nicely done!
angel always...godspeed...joni |
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