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What Raindrops Hide
Contributed by
Rose
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Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
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Watching the raindrops, splashing whatever is in their way
Sometimes, soft misty drops, touching so lightly
Are quiet times to walk, thinking thoughts of the day
Everything seems to stand still, muted, so quietly
Slowly churning away in your mind
All those events happened of late
At times, it’s so overwhelmed, needing to unwind
As the rain-drops blend in with my tears, that couldn’t wait
No one can see you really crying
In mother natures sprinklers leaking
I turn my face upward, thankful I can do this, no one prying
Letting loose all of my pain, without any one peeking
Into my eyes to see what those raindrops do hide
I’m oblivious of the blurry car and town lights in the distance
Feelings do clear in time, opening my spirit wide
So now, I can appeal to my emotions, with no resistance
How good it feels, a walk in the soft falling rain
Good for the soul, reflections of one’s gain or pain
Amber Rose Yeager – October 16, 2002
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Re: What Raindrops Hide
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 08:26:34 AM AEST
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| fantastic write Rose, hope to read more of yours, |
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Re: What Raindrops Hide
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 10:33:59 AM AEST
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This is very beautiful Amber, somewhat sad but beautiful.
And this is the only way I can contact you as my private message thingy still isn't working!!
I just sent you that 'virus alert!' as a joke, then I went and found some proper funny ones. Copy and Pasted them also into another e-mail, and before I could send it to you (probably luckily), my pc completely crashed! So I lost it all.
I'm hoping this was simply a coincidence, and it crashed due to overwork or something?
I do hope you had no bad effects from that silly prank? I am very, very, very sorry if you did. I won't do it again.
Now I'm affraid to send you anything just in case, and don't know what to do? Although I restarted it from the mains switch on the wall, (the only way it'd let me!) I don't want to infect yours in any way if I do happen to have a virus! I only have Norton antivirus, which hasn't detected any, but I don't know if this is good enough anymore?
It's working Ok, and hasn't siezed up again, but I just don't know!
With love
Dean;-( |
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