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In love but unable to write
Contributed by
Lessa
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:02:29 PM in AEST
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once there was a time, when my words were dark and cruel
full of torment and of pain
like a blacked peice of coal
back in a time that seems a million years,
i could write dark poetry and feel that this was it
blood being my answer and death being my prayer
now i write and its the happy words
like flower and pink and things that used to make me sick
i almost look for unhappiness to write,
because evrything else i write turns out like ****!!!!
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Lessa
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2004-06-14 22:02:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In love but unable to write
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:10:50 PM AEST (User
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well this could be worse in some ways. you could somehow make it to where pink is the color of evil or something i dont know. the only reason i dont have anything to write about is when no one is giving me grief. so i guess you have to find whatever makes you write so dark and bring it back. |
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Re: In love but unable to write
(User Rating: 1 ) by buchi on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:44:54 AM AEST (User
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does
open your mind up....good poem
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