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What Tomorrow Will Bring
Contributed by
bluedragonfly
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:50:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She is trying to recapture
The girl that's been lost
The one who had self respect
She was held high
Above all the rest
She is there somewhere
Waiting to come out
She's on her way back
On that
You can count
There is a past
Which is gone forever
But a future
Which is still her own
As she sits and wonders
What tomorrow will bring
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2004-06-14 21:50:11]
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Re: What Tomorrow Will Bring
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:17:28 PM AEST
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| nice write. |
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Re: What Tomorrow Will Bring
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:19:02 PM AEST
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Nice display of practice to make.
Good luck. read ya later. |
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Re: What Tomorrow Will Bring
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:54:37 AM AEST
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A wistful and poignant read. I like your variant rhyme (intentional/unintentional) as it keeps this piece interesting for me.
Thanks for writing. |
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