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Still
Contributed by
bebe20071
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:37:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You cheated it, I ran away
You lie, I began to cry
You left, I was in pain
after all of that I still love you deep?
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bebe20071
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2004-06-14 21:37:45]
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Re: Still
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:39:39 PM AEST
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This is a good poem that I'm sure a lot of people can relate to. Keep up the great writing!
Katie |
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Re: Still
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:08:28 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net.... Short but to the point... It says a lot.
Hope to see more of your work..
Jenni |
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Re: Still
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by betty on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:19:36 PM AEST
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good. Don't be afraid to let more of you, raw emotion come out in your words. I will make a good poem powerful.
I'm no pro, I'm just a newbie too. just some constructive advice that I've been given too. |
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Re: Still
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by Dusty on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:35:06 PM AEST
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| Straight to the point! I like! |
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Re: Still
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:25:35 PM AEST
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| Short To The Point |
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