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Anywhere But Here
Contributed by
sunnyrainbows
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:38:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Conform to change
Or change to conform
Molded by surroundings
Chained to expectations
Haunted by past decisions
Faced with choices
Asked unanswerable questions
Unsure of when to speak
Wanting to leave
No where to go
Stuck in a cycle
But nobody knows
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Re: Anywhere But Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:42:54 PM AEST (User
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This is a great poem and obviously you have some where to go. I think you know where and you will be fine. |
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Re: Anywhere But Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:48:28 PM AEST (User
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a wonderful poem, laid out very nicely, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Anywhere But Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:46:52 PM AEST (User
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hmmmm wow...
paired lines that speak of something I know so well... thank goodness its the summer...
very well-written... almost as if a song... I can already hear it in my head... well done!
~morelikelyrics |
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Re: Anywhere But Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:50:06 AM AEST (User
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I used to think too, school was to make me wiser and give me a direction to follow in life... How amiss I was then..:-)
Good write and a pleasure to read.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Anywhere But Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:19:17 PM AEST (User
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Unique write. This reminds me of my poem Away From Here about wanting to leave a place plagued with fear and bad memories.
Great write. |
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