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she flew
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:46:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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two lives were thrown away
for a long gone summer day
when she smiled at him and won his heart
he never wanted from her to part
but all he did was make her cry
so she moved away and said goodbye
since then his life has been a lie
they were in love so deeply then
now its hard to remember when
all he ever had to do was call
a simple ring and that was all
she flew 'round the world on her own
had much fun and then came home
now they are old, alone, settled in; life and
love's gone by, they don't know how or when
she'd smiled her smile and warmed his heart
for he was so stubborn; that they did part
for he would not say i love you
nor promise to be her only true
forget all that rot and emotion
he'd chosen to sail the ocean
so; now he sits quite alone
looking at his telephone
knows he sailed ships upon the seas
still he dreams of what could be...
dreams of her in the next town
for she flew the world around.
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Re: she flew
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:51:11 PM AEST
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| You know, this could be my life story. Well, except for the growing old part anyway. I can relate to most of this poem, and I think it is absolutely lovely. Maybe I should show it to the stubborn male in my life. |
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Re: she flew
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by slackoffsamiam on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:55:35 PM AEST
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| wow thats a great poem, it had heart. |
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Re: she flew
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:58:27 PM AEST
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Wow, grrlfriend....amazing write..... really touching and sad.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: she flew
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:03:49 PM AEST
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lovely time is too short not to tell them how you feel
Shari |
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Re: she flew
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:17:25 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem.. it was touching.... AMI JO |
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Re: she flew
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:25:50 PM AEST
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How very very sad. A life of love lost because of stubborness. .
Rita |
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Re: she flew
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by blueheart on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:32:50 PM AEST
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| A touching story. Very real and so true. If only he appreciated her, the ending would be perfect. But we dont live in a perfect world do we?? Great write Nessa. |
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Re: she flew
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by Seans_Girl on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:00:13 PM AEST
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| Sad poem but I liked it. |
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Re: she flew
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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Nessa this is wonderful I love it
michelle |
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Re: she flew
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by NoahsARK on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:08:17 PM AEST
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I love your poem and the way you make everything flow together.
This is a sad story but it does help me think on telling people my feelings to people so I wont regrete it. Great Job!
Anita |
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Re: she flew
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:54:47 AM AEST
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| Awww.. a man with telescope..awaiting her return..Ooh ..poor guy. Hugs Nessa.. this is a captivating story..venkat |
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Re: she flew
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:08:56 AM AEST
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Captivating and flowing, as ever.
Thanks for writing! |
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Re: she flew
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:19:05 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome song of love and heartache. I can relate to this |
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by Dusty on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:13:20 AM AEST
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| I think everyone can relate to this one in some small way...sad but beautiful. |
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Re: she flew
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:37:53 AM AEST
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now its hard to remember when
all he ever had to do was call
a simple ring and that was all
Related to these words so much.
A love long in the past memories to remain forever in my heart
Beautiful poem
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx
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Re: she flew
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by Merry on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:21:52 PM AEST
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a sad and poignant poem of love's opportunity missed - but whatever will be will be and all the rest falls by the wayside -
hugs
merry |
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:03:57 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this was fantastic. Quite the story. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: she flew
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 05:54:59 PM AEST
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| Lack of communication ruins so many relationships. This was absolutely perfect. Nice work! J. |
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Re: she flew
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by colinb on
Wednesday, 6th August 2014 @ 01:55:51 PM AEST
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| So beautiful though very sad truth |
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Re: she flew
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 12:10:06 PM AEST
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There is an important lesson in your words...Well said.
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