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A Puzzle and Blood
Contributed by
creed
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:08:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Walking around
With your knife
In my back
A smile painted on your face
With my blood
With my pain
A soul like a puzzle
Missing almost every piece
Everyday the puzzle fades
And everyday my blood amuses
you more, and more
Copyright ©
creed
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2004-06-14 19:08:38]
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Re: A Puzzle and Blood
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:39:14 PM AEST
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I have known several people that are only happy when others are sad. They must lead a miserble existence. If things start looking up they cause something to bring everyone down around them.
Rita |
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Re: A Puzzle and Blood
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by creed on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:41:05 PM AEST
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| yeah, i dont understand people that are like that. |
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Re: A Puzzle and Blood
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:31:15 AM AEST
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Yeah, I know ppl like that. It's a shame that they feel that way. There must be something terribly wrong with them. I think it very unique the way you compared the soul to a puzzle. Something to make you go "hmmmmmmmm". : o ) Good write.
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Re: A Puzzle and Blood
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by TaintedOptomist on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:01:05 PM AEST
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honestly i enjoy when people who are better off,but of course they have to have some karmic way of deserving what they get, having to deal with hardships. i like to see the people's reaction when they're beat down to the same levle as me.
people who deserve these things,yes i revel in it. |
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