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That horrible day!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I was woke up by what I tought was a dream,
But as I sat up,I heard a lady scream,
I could hear her crying and saying STOP!
So I picked up the phone to call a cop!
Just when I did I saw a car drive away,
So I went to her house to see if shes O.K,
I got to her door that was open just a bit,
She was laying on the floor,and was badly hit,
She was bleeding all over,mostly on her head,
I tried to comfort her,but all I saw was RED!
She screamed with pain,and was still in fear,
I remembered she asked,"Is he still here?"
The police are coming,I let her know,
How could he hit her and than just go?!
As I stepped back,when help arrived,
I wondered did I help her survive?
Would she remember that I was there,
comforting her while I wiped away her tear!
The next day people were all around,
checking out the place,ropeing off the ground
The police told me that she had died,
I tried to help her,I realy tried!
This stranger I will never know or see,
But I heard her cries that terrified me!
This man that did this is put away,
And I'll never forget that horrible day!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-10-17 06:30:00]
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Re: That horrible day!
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 06:45:00 AM AEST
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oh.... my goodnes... how awful to have to witness something like that... good write though.
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Re: That horrible day!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 11:35:50 PM AEST
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| wow lowman This is something! I can't imagine seeing this! Great way of putting it into words. |
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Re: That horrible day!
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by nightrider on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 12:20:45 PM AEST
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| oh, hon, i am so sorry! if this actually happened, i bet it is awful! i am so sorry! thanks for sharing the poem with me though, putting feelings into words is always amazing! |
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