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impact
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:33:35 PM in AEST
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loud music and high pitched screams
smiles across all four young faces
wheels slide and laughs are silenced
horrified faces watch very intently
finally all four wheels meet the ground
three bodies remain shocked inside
one consciouss body lay underneath
two minds comprehend what has happened
other two brains are so confused
the name of the trapped one is screamed
calm voice asks for friends help
adrenaline rush lifts up the vehicle
with assistance the body rises
slowly it lays down in the backseat
a bloody face peers over a broken window
hushed apologies escapes worried lips
one assists her to her blood staind sister
other helps his immovable friend
shaky voice calls in a local emergency
terrified daughter calls her parents
scared driver calls his, then the dreaded
phone call made to the broken one's family
bloody face girl wanders around
body and mind racing through the field
paralyzed one loses her patience
wants help to arrive right now
mothers driver, a nurse, appears
helps out in any way possible
finally sirens scream out franticlly
paralayzed one sees nothing but black
voices tell the body what to do
board is slid underneath and strapped
moving stops and more waiting
after many long minutes, it arrives
paramedics move motionless body inside
another body covered in chrimson follows
smallest body climbs in front and watches
men ask the bodies their names
one responds to their questions
other body utters a painful groan
no words escape the blood covered face
three injured bodies taken away
rushed to the emergency room
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deadbloodyrose
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2004-06-14 15:33:35]
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Re: impact
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by Seans_Girl on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:53:32 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that that happened to you. It sounds horrible. I haven't ever been in a car accident that severe but I do know friends that have and none of them survived. I really glad you did. Take Care and godbless
Natalie |
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Re: impact
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by bluedragonfly on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:34:19 PM AEST
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| my boy was only 7 when he was hit by a car. even tho the outside scars have healed, we r still working the emotional scars. i wish u and everyone else involved the very best. |
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Re: impact
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:39:00 PM AEST
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very sad......... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: impact
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:49:08 PM AEST
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i was at the edge of my seat the whole read,extremly emotional a real emotion jerker.VERY VERY good write
~vermillion~ |
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