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untitled
Contributed by
betty
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
political
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my hands bound
blind folded and gagged
tied to this bed of subjugation
I writhe in vain
freedom is only an illusion
dangling in front of me
his footsteps getting closer
he speaks my name
in his voice
passionate contempt
my savior my captor
his breath my bare skin
Fantasies rush in like the tide
guided by the moon
full and beautiful
my bare breasts
Dissatisfaction swirls inside me
the rope burns my wrists
my soft skin
his hands
strong
soothing
cold
release me from these restraints
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-06-14 15:24:22]
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Re: untitled
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by full_blur on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:53:01 PM AEST
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| the imagery you use here is amazing and captivating! keep up the good work! |
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Re: untitled
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by aernby on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:26:58 AM AEST
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this is a very evocative piece. It is a little wordy, IMHO, and would benefit from a careful rewrite.
still, this is well done ... |
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:15:40 PM AEST
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I liked the imagery and this is another good one, I like all of your writing so far and will continue to read more. Keep up the good work, you have talent!
~Kris~ |
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Re: untitled
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:31:34 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one...very descriptive keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: untitled
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:03:32 PM AEST
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| great wording and discription. Nice work. |
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