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I don't know......?
Contributed by
Puppy
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:54:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I don't know what to write
It really bites
The sound in the backround sucks
I don't have any luck
I hate this life
It really bites
I don't know what to do
I don't know what to write
It really bites.
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Re: I don't know......?
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:03:56 PM AEST
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This is real good, for a person that doesn't know what to write.... you done good.
Your poem is a good example that whatever comes to mind ( or not ) works.
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Re: I don't know......?
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by bluedragonfly on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:57:54 PM AEST
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| Tomorrow is a new day, we can all look forward to new beginnings. Hope u have a better tomorrow. |
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Re: I don't know......?
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:46:20 AM AEST
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Nice Write!!!! Good work, enoyable read for sure.
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Re: I don't know......?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:07:44 AM AEST
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See you did know what to write after all! nice work.
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