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My Thoughts
Contributed by
vinnie731
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:52:07 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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My thoughts can be negative, my poetry can be dark these are my thoughts try to understand, I have problems, a life of chaos, I don’t mean to scare you with my thoughts, longing for greatness remembrance of my past, I know optimism is far from reach, but I know the day will come when all my thoughts are positive, my thoughts will never be understood for you cant surrender your front, all my life I see my past as lost, my thoughts are crazy to some, my dreams become unrealistic when my thoughts are twisted and tangled by the roaring sea, here are my thoughts, so please try to understand me.
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Re: My Thoughts
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by farmtowngirl on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:13:40 PM AEST
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This poem was awesome! i know exactly what ur feeling! my friends don't understand some of my poetry and thoughts too. the negative part in there really made me think about my own life! keep it up!
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Re: My Thoughts
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by Dusty on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:52:45 PM AEST
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I completely identified with this one...
I know it it awfully frustrating when your friends don't or even WON'T understand you.... |
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