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unpardonable
Contributed by
orgygirl
on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 06:35:38 AM in AEST
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Let hate enter my heart
as delusions clutter my soul
feed me many lies
your heart has grown ice cold
stab me in the back
persecute my ideals
watch me as I bleed
my pain becomes surreal
emptieness engulfs me
and my eyes begin to glaze
a single tear of blood rolls down a pasty cheek
I lay in a perilous daze
time has no meaning as the minutes pass me by
this betrayal I shan't feel again
leave my side, friend
please let me die
Copyright ©
orgygirl
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2002-07-16 06:35:38]
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Re: unpardonable
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 11:31:46 PM AEST
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| Do you know the same people as I did? Let them think they've won, study hard at whatever interests you, then wee on them all from your mansion window and watch them squirm in their puddle of jelousy! It feels good I can tell you. |
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Re: unpardonable
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 11:33:55 PM AEST
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| Sorry, Your good writing is full of feeling! Good or bad it shows you care! |
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Re: unpardonable
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by xFalling_of_Starsx on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:18:03 AM AEST
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| i thought i already left you a comment for this one, because you know how much i love it. But this one made me all Teary- eyed, agian. lol, your poetry so easily moves me. The last line especially i thought you were talking directly to me. Luv ya hon. |
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Re: unpardonable
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by WAE on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 11:33:12 AM AEST
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Very deep and sad...
Alex |
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