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Sad Tears
Contributed by
LiLTor878
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:22:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Is there a reason why,
People just break down and cry,
Tears just start to gleam,
And then, down their face, they begin to stream.
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LiLTor878
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2004-06-14 13:22:27]
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Re: Sad Tears
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by apollo on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:26:15 PM AEST
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short and gentle yet tragic and sincere. i am sorry you feel sad. we all feel sad at times. you must look away from the night shine and look towards the glory of the day. if you need somebody to talk to. i am always here.
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Re: Sad Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:36:25 PM AEST
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so sad yet so real........... well done:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sad Tears
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by lexxie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 06:05:57 PM AEST
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this is a sad poem very true
loved it
i hurt much more
i have no options left agian
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Re: Sad Tears
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by sunnyrainbows on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:20:09 PM AEST
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short, but can make you think.
you used the word "just" twice in two rows - made it sound a bit repetitive
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Re: Sad Tears
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by Dying_Angel on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:38:40 PM AEST
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| I personally think people cry instead of cutting, burning or genrelly injuring themselves. See what I mean? |
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