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WHAT A LOSS!
Contributed by
Cursed_Witch
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:19:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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We met eight years ago
Soon became the ultimate friends
Three years have passed by
Without seeing u once
I knew all your secrets
And you knew mine
The day we met
You told me ur feelings were stronger
But I never took u for more than a friend
Then one day, you told me
Goodbye and left the country forever
Our friendship dissipated in time
Everything was gone so fast
Incredibly, fate brought us back together
I tried to revive the past
But u have changed
Somehow u gave up
I never wanted to loose what we had
But u shattered it to pieces
The harm was done
And the damage is eternal
All I can say is
What a loss!
Copyright ©
Cursed_Witch
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2004-06-14 13:19:48]
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Re: WHAT A LOSS!
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by apollo on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:34:08 PM AEST
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you lost your love. that is so sad. makes one who lacks to cry want to make a waterfall of emotion. i am so sorry. i feel like i have lost my love to. just hang in there and be happy. do whatever it takes. things will be good. i promise. beautiful write.
brandon |
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Re: WHAT A LOSS!
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by saphfyre on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 06:32:45 PM AEST
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| What could have been... is lost, and wondering.. and realizing some things cant be fixed. I've felt it. If a moment here or there were changed on my end... maybe it wouldnt be what it is. But still, "you" wouldnt allow it to change back. Sad, guilty, regretful..fighting not to be angry.... |
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