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hello beautiful pt.1
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:09:36 PM in AEST
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hello beautiful, i'm glad to see
that you have forgotten me
but i'd like to remind you of a story
so close your eyes and i'll take you inside a memory...
...let yourself inside this vulnerability...
...embrace the fear...
...you see
i seem to recall a hole in your heart
do you remember? it was that piece you chose to tear out,
only to ask if a piece of mine was enough to fill
your loneliness. you asked if i had it in me to make you feel.
to our disappointment the love i shared was not enough
and so the gaping hole in your chest started collecting dust
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2004-06-14 13:09:36]
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Re: hello beautiful pt.1
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:13:47 PM AEST
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this is brilliant! wow! awesome how you wrote this:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: hello beautiful pt.1
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by purplestary on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:15:50 PM AEST
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| this is great..going to read the second part now. |
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Re: hello beautiful pt.1
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:26:00 PM AEST
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| amazing... |
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