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Rendezvous with Nothing New
Contributed by
scottbuttross
on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:14:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Despite these clouds
I have seen better days
Ocean’s waves
Cary my heart so many
Different ways
The wind that carries
Me now leads me on
Adventures.
But I am always
Forced to go another way
By the barrier reef that
surrounds my heart with
the emotions she gave.
This reef continues to
Grow thicker every day since
That winter when my love
Lost its comrade with whom
I would embark with on each adventure
I was left behind…
I have searched
For another to be mine.
But I always find myself
Lacking the desire for a different
Mind.
She was the one who I wanted to find.
And I have cried rivers only
To settle those waves that pull me away
Now cold rain leaves me without
Vision
I cannot make a decision
Which way to go.
So I always return back
To the emotions only she use
To know.
-Scott E Buttross
Copyright ©2004 Scott E Buttross
Copyright ©
scottbuttross
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2004-06-14 12:14:54]
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Re: Rendezvous with Nothing New
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:24:35 PM AEST
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flowing, haunting sad and beautiful all wrapped into one I can feel the longing and missing in this poem well done
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Re: Rendezvous with Nothing New
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by full_blur on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:00:09 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. I admire the way that the flow of your stanzas mirror the overall theme of a flowing oceans with tides and waves and constant motion. This is a moving and well written piece. |
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